I have just fished reading Gustavo's i am blog. in that blog it tells that he came from the school of I.S 230 and how he met most of his friends . it also tells how old he was when he came to the USA.
he has good spacing and his paragraph a well separated
but the only thing Wrong is that some words are spelled wrong or in I.M language. but over all he did a good job in his had writing so i would give him a 4 out of 8 .
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